First it was a boring day at home playing games,suddenly my brother said “ Get up go put on some warm clothes” why “no questions just do it” After that we got in the car and drove to ice skating I was shocked and surprised then we saw the sign it said arena opens at 8.30 so we went to countdown and bought some snacks and some drinks 10 minutes later ………
next we went to the amazing ice skating paradise as soon as I walked in it was freezing like dry ice. Next we went to the place to get skate when I got on the ice I was holding onto the side I saw on the floor it was sketched out all the skate blade. My brother dashed beside me I was in impact. My sister’s got on the ice my littlest sister got a frame but I didn't I was pessimistic. Surprisingly my brother gave me a fame I was in merry.
I started to skate slow then I picked up the momentum and gone faster and faster than gone super fast but I didn’t know how to stop plumbed into the wall like a wild goose my brother said “go sit down if you want to” after that I was in terrible pain I couldn't skate for the last 20 minutes I was in fury 20 minutes later ………
“Can I go skate now” I said “yes you can why were you sitting down” “because you told me to sit down for 20 minutes” “no I didn’t I said you can sit down if you want to” “ OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH” so I got back on the ice and fell down again and again and again and again. 2 hours later ……..
I feel exhausted and hungry after that we went to the takeaway shop to get some takeaways it took 10 minutes to get to our house we ate the takeaways after that all of us went to sleep I woke up and it was a dream just joking.
Hi my name is Lleyton and I am a student at Wesley primary and I just have to say that you have written an amazing story using your vocab and knowledge of memory to create this master piece! You've described it so good I could just picture it in my mind of all the fun you were having. In the end you had actually trolled me and my friend. This is the best story I have ever read. If you would like to see my learning here is my blog http://wpslleytonh.blogspot.co.nz/
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hi my name is john i am in room 4 at wesley primary school and WOWWWWWW!!!... Magnificent work!!! you have wrote a wonderful story. It made me wanna go ice skating! you have used wonderful words, i could imagine you falling again and again and again. while i was reading your work it shocked me with those wonderful sentences and words. you actually trolled me at the end to be honest. If you would like to see my learning my blog is http://wpsjohnp.blogspot.co.nz/
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